Behind the Scenes

Funny romance comic covers are rare. This one from 1956 was published without any dialogue. And it’s a great sight gag–even without dialogue.

But since this is Last Kiss I added text anyway to try and ramp up the joke. As often happens, I went through several rewrites before I was satisfied.

For the fun of it, here’s my first attempt at the gag (See below.) I thought it was too wordy and not quite twisted enough!

My first attempt at this gag–a little too wordy and not quite twisted enough.

 

Original Vintage Art & Text

Pencils by Dick Giordano? Inks by Dick Giordano from the cover of Brides in Love #1, Aug. 1956. Published by Charlton Comics.

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↓ Transcript
SCENE: Bride and groom are leaving when her small luggage opens and we see a photo of another man spilling out.

GROOM: That’s...my best man!

BRIDE: Yours? Can’t we share him?

1956 Inks (& possibly pencils too): Dick Giordano
Picture Perfect: John Lustig

Brides in Love #1.0.Cropped